White

• The introduction did catch my attention because fishing was mine and my grandpa’s thing and I love it!

• White remembers specific moments when he had been there before.

• I was able to picture the lake he was at, the small of the lumber and how beautiful it was.

• It was mainly memories, not a whole lot of dialogue.

• Readers will connect to White easier if they have experienced fishing and all other lake activities. I connected to his essay because I grew up going to the lake with my grandpa all the time.

• Yes, he includes a lot of memories that were very important to him.