Summary Revision

In my essay I wanted to talk about Zinssers four pressures in his essay College Pressures. They are economic, parental, peer, and self-induced. I started out by talking about how pressure is in everyday life and how it is ok to go down one's own path. I think that it clearly sets the tone on what I wanted to introduce throughout the paper. I tried to not put my own opinions in the paper and stick to my main points that I wanted to deliver. I am a very opinionated person, but I did leave out my own opinions as best as I could and just stuck to summarizing the essay.